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Possible related texts for Conflict Essay
March 17, 2010, 12:04 pm
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Members of our class have asked me for suggestions for related texts.

This is an understandable request considering many of you have not read a book of poetry for pleasure (Hilly, you’re an exception to this comment!) or a collection of classic or modern classic short stories. When relating a text to ‘Oedipus the King’ it is essential that it is deep and sophisticated in regards to ideas and the ways in which language and form have been manipulated to express these ideas.

This does not mean that texts from your own wide reading are not ‘good enough’, it simply means that you must choose your text wisely.

Here is a list of possible texts:

‘Ozymandias’ by Percy Bysshe Shelley

‘Sailing to Byzantium’ by William ButlerYeats

‘The Raven’ by Edgar Allan Poe

‘Because I Could Not Stop For Death’ by Emily Dickenson

‘I Stood Musing in a Black World’ by Stephen Crane

‘The Conqueror Worm’ by Edgar Allan Poe

‘The Lake Isle of Innisfree’ by William Butler Yeats

‘Tulips’ by Sylvia Plath

‘A Clean Well-Lighted Place’ by Ernest Hemingway

The text that you choose will depend on the points that you wish to make in regards to the concept ‘conflict’.



Structuring Your AOS Essay
March 17, 2010, 9:53 am
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In class we have spent time speaking about the appropriate paragraph structure for an analytical English essay (STEW) and also the use of a more academic style language (nominalisation; qualifiers). However, we have not spent much time discussing the structure of the essay as a whole.

I like to think that writing essays is a creative activity – I personally get much pleasure from writing an analysis of a text. I get to express my views on a text and what I feel it is telling me about the world and why the responder wishes to convey this message in a certain way. The fact that I get to manipulate language myself in order to express these ideas is an added bonus.Because I find writing essays such a pleasurable experience, I don’t like being told how I have to do it. I like playing around with the form of an essay. Sometimes I’ll write from the first person, when I’m really passionate about a text (usually this is poem), and sometimes I’ll write in the third-person and imagine that I’m a university professor being paid to analyse my favourite piece of literature. Yet, I am a firm believer that one must KNOW the rules before one can effectively SUBVERT the rules. This applies to essay writing as much as it applies to life in a capitalist democratic society.

Of course, not everyone is as English-geeky as me. Some people (OK, lots of people) find analysing a text and then writing about it quite difficult and therefore need some rules to abide by. It’s easy when you’re doing something for the first time, or for something really important (like an assessment task) that you have a guide or a model to look at.

Sooo … I have always taught AOS essays in a specific way. Most of you guys would be familiar with this style. I’ll outline it below:

Introduction: Respond to question. List your texts. Outline your three thesis points to be addressed.

P1: Thesis One. Text One.

p2: Thesis One. Text Two.

p3: Thesis Two. Text One

p4: Thesis Two. Text Two.

p5: Thesis Three. Text One.

p6: Thesis Three. Text Two.

Conclusion: Summarise your points, relist your texts. Awesome concluding statement.

Now this has worked well when comparing TWO texts. But when more than two texts are compared, the essay can become quite long and the analysis is quite superficial – you just don’t get any depth to your argument. Another problem arises when the ‘thesis points’ are quite distinct – in that they don’t allow for any logical development in your argument. An argument is what drives your essay – it is the reason that you have written an essay in the first place (apart from the obvious ‘teacher made me do it’ reason). You are asked a question by the examiner, and you need to take a position and support it with evidence and analysis. That’s why you write an essay – to argue a point of view.

So, an alternative structure that I have derived is shown below:

Introduction: Respond to question. List your texts. Outline your one over-arching thesis points to be addressed. Outline your TWO sub-thesis points specific to each text.

p1:Text One. Specific Thesis Point. First and second examples.

p2: Text One. Specific Thesis Point. Third and Fourth examples.

p3: Text Two. Specific Thesis Point. First and second examples.

p4: Text Two. Specific Thesis Point. Third and Fourth examples.

Conclusion: Summarise your points, relist your texts. Awesome concluding statement.

The structure above links the texts through one general thesis point (e.g. It is in the act of discovering the truth that the most significant conflicts arise.) Each text reflects this notion of conflict (discovery of truth as catalyst for conflict) yet in differing ways (e.g. Oedipus discovers truth of his parentage and Plath’s persona discovers failing of religion to provide hope).

I have found a great website that suggests another way of structuring a comparing/contrast essay, and I really like it. It is similar to both of the structures outlined above, yet it makes a point of stressing the importance of an argument coming to a logical conclusion. See the site to help you see what I mean: http://karolus.net/contr.html

Looking over the essay of top students from the last few years, I feel that there is no ‘correct’ essay structure. What you must ensure is that you spend some time planning your response BEFORE you start writing. You need to think about HOW your texts connect in relation to conflict, and also how they do not. As you write your essay you should attempt to link between your texts using those ‘transitionary phrases’ (A comparison can be drawn between ‘Opedipus the King’ and ‘Nick and the Candlestick’ in that they both explore the notion of an internal conflict catalysed by external factors OR Interestingly, Plath suggests that organised religion is the source of conflict, whereas Sophocles suggests that it is man himself). So really, you’re intertwining them throughout your essay.

Off now to write a post on possible related texts as this seems to be of interest to a number of you.



Graphic Oraganisers

As part of your first English assessment task you are required to create a graphic organiser demonstrating your understanding of the relationships between your prescribes text and your related text. The graphic organiser is also meant to represent the content that will be used to write your essay.

There are a number of possibilities for your graphic organiser. These organisers will be used as personal study tools for you as an individual, therefore there is no ‘better’ organiser to use. What is best is what works for you. I suggest that you try a few different types of organsisers to see which you feel works best. This will be a messy, yet creative process that will help you to organise your ideas – the most important aspects of the concept ‘conflict’; the links between your texts; the quotes you will use; your verbs-of-doing; the techniques you will discuss etc.

Some possible graphic organiser types:

Spider Graph: http://www.eduplace.com/graphicorganizer/pdf/spider.pdf

Cluster Map: http://www.eduplace.com/graphicorganizer/pdf/cluster.pdf

Cluster Map 2: http://www.eduplace.com/graphicorganizer/pdf/clusterweb2.pdf

Cluster Map 3: http://www.eduplace.com/graphicorganizer/pdf/cluster_web3.pdf

E-Chart (You;d put a few on one page): http://www.eduplace.com/graphicorganizer/pdf/echart.pdf

Online Mind-mapping tool: http://bubbl.us/

Sandwich Chart: http://www.eduplace.com/graphicorganizer/pdf/sandwich.pdf

Persuasion Map: http://www.eduplace.com/graphicorganizer/pdf/persuasion.pdf

Venn Diagram (You’d need one for each thesis point): http://www.eduplace.com/graphicorganizer/pdf/venn.pdf

Goal/reason Web: http://www.eduplace.com/graphicorganizer/pdf/goal_reason.pdf

Double-cell Diagram: http://www.graphic.org/bubble.html

Creating online: http://www.xmind.net/

Hierarchy Chart: http://www.educationoasis.com/curriculum/GO/GO_pdf
Compare/Contrast (needs modifying): http://www.educationoasis.com/curriculum/GO/GO_pdf/characters_common.pdf

Please keep in mind that these are just suggestions. You may prefer to create your own using MS Word or similar. It is probably a good idea that you use a computer to create your organiser, as this will allow constant access to your study tool. A hand-written or drawn organiser can be created in the early draft stage, but then it should be polished up for submission.



Assessment Task 1: Discussion

Today Year 11 were given notification of the very first English assessment task.

This task has two parts and Mr Moran spoke to the year group as a whole about the requirements of the task.

Below is a series of notes I took during his presentation.

Please add any questions that you have regarding the assessment task below this post and not on edmodo. Your questions may seem silly to you, but they will be thoughts held by your peers. Be brave, speak up and help our class achieve as a group.

Looking at the outcomes for this task is an essential activity – these are what we hope you will achieve by the end of the activity.

For your outcomes, a couple of points are important:

  • link your texts through the concept ‘conflict’ OR through techniques OR through purpose/effect
  • show you understanding of HOW techniques ‘shape meaning’ – this means discussing why the way it is written/composed affects your perception of: the text; the composer; the world of the text; yourself; other people; your world
  • include quotes that actually support your argument(s) – they must match your discussion of the concept ‘conflict’ and help to create a logical sequence in your argument

PART A: (Representation)

Your goal with the graphic organiser is to create a POWERFUL STUDY AID. It is also meant to show how you have organised your ideas BEFORE writing your essay. The idea is that it should help you visualise and organise the information. These types of study aides will become instinctive as you prepare for assessments and examinations. The information that you include on your graphic organiser should easily be converted into well-constructed paragraphs.

Mr Moran suggested that you number the paragraphs on your graphic organiser, or order them on the representation to help you to better organise the logic of your essay. You may also like to make room for your ‘verbs of doing’ and ‘conjunctions’ (see below).

PART B: (These ideas are relevant to Part A also, as this information will be included on your graphic organiser)

Mr Moran spoke for an extended period on the importance of discussing ‘HOW composers have used the language features of their chosen for to represent ideas about conflict.’ We refer to ‘language features’ as ‘techniques’ at our school. When discussing the effects of techniques, you are discussing the way that the composer has used certain techniques to translate their ideas. This HOW is the WHY of S.T.E.W. You must ask yourself: WHY has this technique been used? WHY is this technique effective? Discuss what effect the technique has on the responder (e.g. ‘the metaphor enlivens the readers’ imagination’) – it does NOT mean explaining what has happened in the text. Better responses will EVALUATE the importance of the concepts for the responder.

Another feature of essay-writing that is essential when writing an integrated extended response is the use of ‘conjunctions’ – I refer to these as ‘transitionary phrases’. These linking phrases come BETWEEN paragraphs to show the relationship between texts. For example, ‘A parallel can be drawn between …’, ‘A similar idea is explored in …’ These linking phrases are important sign posts for your reader to help them follow the logic of your argument and to understand the connections between your texts. This technique is essential for writing an integrated response.

In regards to academic writing, Mr Moran briefly touched on the use of nouns to drive your statements. We have spoken in class about ‘nominalisation’ (def: turning a verb or adjective into a noun. E.g. ‘We discussed a tax cut’ becomes ‘Our discussion concerned a tax cut’) and this must be demonstrated in your essay AND graphic organiser. Consider what the concept or idea is that you want to discuss in your paragraph. This should be an abstract noun and will come at the beginning of your opening statement.

A final feature of academic style writing is the use of ‘qualifiers’ before important nouns. Your textual analysis will require a discussion of techniques (mentioned above) and these become important nouns in your paragraphs. To create a more effective discussion of techniques, you should add a ‘qualifier’ to the noun. This assists your explanation of the impact of the technique on the responder. Examples: ‘driving rhythm’; ”grotesque imagery’; ‘confessional tone’. The abstract nouns – rhythm, imagery, tone – have been described better by the use of a qualifier – driving; grotesque; confessional. The use of qualifiers are a hallmark of a good writer.

Length was something students were interested in. Mr Moran suggested that 900 words should be the maximum length for the essay. He felt that under examination conditions in Year 11, no more could be expected and therefore a prepared response should not exceed this limit. I think this limit is great for Advanced – often students feel that the more they write the better. This is a false assumption. Advanced students write in a verbose manner – this means using too many multi-syllable and long sentences to express ideas that could be expressed succinctly. Often students try to sound clever and trip up on their words. Use your language effectively, say more with less words. Aim for ‘lexical density’ in your writing, basically this means using more ‘content’ words and less ‘filler’.

A list of ‘ingredients’ for a good S.T.E.W paragraph were put up:

  • Quote
  • Technique
  • Verb of doing to describe effect
  • Effect
  • Purpose
  • Evaluation
  • Link

These are some things to think about when planning your essay. Of course, the first four are essential and the last four combine often in your responses. We are blessed to have a class of very clever and diligent students, and as a consequence you mostly do this naturally. However, it is essential that these ingredients are evident within your essay.

It is recommended that you use the ‘Marking Guidelines’ for both tasks to guide your responses. They are both very user-friendly.

Finally, the point was made that teacher feedback will cease 48 hours before the assessment task is due.

NOTE: Discussion about how many thesis points or s specific essay structure was NOT discussed. This will be covered in class on Thursday.



Related Text: ‘Nick and the Candlestick’ by Sylvia Plath
March 14, 2010, 11:27 pm
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Sylvia Plath wrote this poem, in the months prior to her suicide. The poem captures her inner conflict as she attempts to come to terms with facing a seemingly cruel world alone. Despair pervades the poem through the cumulation of bleak images and a desperate, personal tone,  ‘Black bat airs/Wrap me, raggy shawls,/Cold homicides.’  The extended metaphor of a miner, ‘I am a miner’ and ‘I have hung our cave with roses’, elegantly conveys her vain attempts to hide away from the world whilst simultaneously striving to find something to value that will bring her joy and a sense of security. This precious object is the child as messiah that is discovered almost accidentally by Plath, ‘O love, how did you get here?’ The ‘baby in the barn’ is portrayed as Plath’s saviour, the resolution to her inner conflict, and possibly the saviour of all mankind.

Interestingly, Plath rejects formalised religion, referring to it cynically as a ‘A piranha/Religion, drinking/ Its first communion out of my live toes.’  This cynical attitude is further conveyed through her sarcastic reference to the ‘holy Joes’. Plath’s conflict with society’s valuing of religion reflects the existential crisis pervading her context. Her modern world has just morphed into the post-modern world where faith in religion has waned, replaced by a questioning of all absolute values – including traditional religious beliefs and moral frameworks.

This eternal existential conflict becomes more immediate for Plath as she internalized it with her genuine concern for the safety of herself and her child. Her suggestion that the world is collapsing in on itself is both literal and metaphorical – she is aware of the wider conflicts within society, but she is more concerned with her own conflicted sense of self. The child who the ‘blood blooms clean’ in is her one remaining hope – the reason she continues to live. On a macrocosmic level, however, the child is symbolic for humanity and the belief that the determination and strength of individuals will save the human race, despite the loss of religion and a stable moral framework.

In connecting this poem to  Sophocles’ ‘Oedipus the King’, it is apparent that it is an inversion of the play’s narrative and a subversion of its teachings about the role of man in relation to the gods. For Sophocles his protagonist, Oedipus, begins as a man of action, self-confidence and pride. However as the plot unravels and he discovers the truth about his past, his self-assurance declines. The flaw for Oedipus is his hubris and results in the fracturing of his self-conception and a dislocation from his known world. This contrasts distinctly with the persona in Plath’s poem who initially lacks confidence in herself and in her place in the world. By the end of the poem she has recovered slightly and reveals greater confidence in her future thanks to her faith in the child.

Whilst the poems can be contrasted in relation to the main characters’ identity, they can also be contrasted in relation to the perception of the role of religion and the individual. For Sophocles, the play ‘Oedipus the King’ is a vehicle through which he can make comment on the shifting view of the gods and man as evident in his world. Oedipus’ doubts in regards to the potency of the oracle’s prophecies and his belief in his own power as being equal to the gods is a narrative device established to question individuals holding similar views in Sophocles’ time. By representing Oedipus’ tragic and confronting fall, Sophocles reminds his audience of man’s place within the universe he is but a man.

In contrast, Plath’s poem suggests that religion is constraining and unreliable. It provides no comfort for her, rather it drains her of her life. This frustration with religion is highly reflective of her questioning and critical context. (See note above on poem). For Plath, the solution to her existential conflict is the determination and power of man to change the future. For Sophocles, the solution is a reaffirming of man’s awareness of his fallibility in relation to the gods and a predetermined universe.



Techniques in Oedipus the King: Essay Helpers
March 8, 2010, 11:20 am
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Greek Tragedy:

This is a fantatsic site that discusses Greek Tragedy, focusing on ‘Oedipus the King’ as Aristotle’s influence for writing his rules of tragedy in the Poetics.

The site also discusses the origins of Greek theatre – the Dionysian Festivals.

Check it out:

http://artsedge.kennedy-center.org/greece/theater/prologue.html

This page contains a great discussion of the structure of tragedies:

http://artsedge.kennedy-center.org/greece/theater/playsTragicStructure.html

The Tragic Structure

The tragedies of Aeschylus, Euripides and Sophocles followed strict structure and form, which was designed to effectively communicate not only the story of the play, but also the underlying moral to the audience.

A typical ancient Greek tragedy consists of five essential sections, some of which are repeated as necessary to accommodate the plot. They are:

Prologue:

A monologue or dialogue presenting the tragedy’s topic.

Parados:

The entry of the chorus; using unison chant and dance, they explain what has happened leading up to this point.

Episode:

This is the main section of the play, where most of the plot occurs. Actors speak dialogue about the plot (more so than taking action, much of which is offstage and later commented upon). The chorus often interacts with the actors.

Stasimon:

The chorus comments upon the episode to the audience.

Exodos:

The final chorus chant where the moral of the tragedy is discussed.

An episode/stasimon grouping would be added depending on plot needs. For example, in the case of Oedipus Rex by Sophocles, there are six episodes, allowing for significant plot development. In place of the fifth stasimon, Sophocles inserted a Kommos after episode five, which is a lyrical exchange between actors and the chorus to describe how Oedipus has blinded himself. The final episode in Oedipus Rex is followed by a brief exodus that concludes the play.

Style

The Genre of Greek Tragic Drama

Ever since Aristotle’s high praise regarding its structure and characterization in his Poetics, Oedipus Rex has been considered one of the most outstanding examples of tragic drama. In tragedy, a protagonist inspires in his audience the twin emotions of pity and fear. Usually a person of virtue and status, the tragic hero can be a scapegoat of the gods or a victim of circumstances. Their fate (often death or exile) establishes a new and better social order. Not only does it make the viewer aware of human suffering, tragedy illustrates the manner in which pride (hubris) can topple even the strongest of characters. It is part of the playwright’s intention that audiences will identify with these fallen heroes-and possibly rethink the manner in which they live their lives. Theorists of tragedy, beginning with Aristotle, have used the term catharsis to capture the sense of purgation and purification that watching a tragedy yield in a viewer: relief that they are not in the position of the protagonist and awareness that one slip of fate could place them in such circumstances.

Structure

The dramatic structure of Greek drama is helpfully outlined by Aristotle in the twelfth book of Poetics. In this classical tragedy, a Prologue shows Oedipus consulting the priest who speaks for the Theban elders, the first choral ode or Parodos is performed, four acts are presented and followed by odes called stasimons, and in the Exodos, or final act, the fate of Oedipus is revealed.

Staging

Tragedies in fifth-century Athens were performed in the marketplace, known in Greek as the agora. The dramatic competitions of the Great Dionysia, Athens’s annual cultural and religious festival, were held in a structure made of wood near the Acropolis. The chorus performed on a raised stage. There were no female actors, and it is still unknown (though much speculated upon) whether women attended these performances. It is also noteworthy that the performance space was near the Pnyx, the area in which the century’s increasingly heated and rhetorically sophisticated political debates took place — a feature of Athenian cultural life that suggests the pervasive nature of spectacles of polished and persuasive verbal expression.

The Chorus

The Greek chorus, like the genre of tragedy itself, is reputed to be a remnant of the ritualistic and ceremonial origins of Greek tragedy. Sophocles added three members of the chorus to Aeschylus’s twelve. In terms of form, the choral ode has a tripartite structure which bears traces of its use as a song and dance pattern. The three parts are called, respectively, the strophe, the antistrophe, and the epode; their metrical structures vary and are usually very complex. If the strophe established the dance pattern, in the antistrophe the dancers trace backwards the same steps, ending the ode in a different way with the epode.

With respect to content, the choral odes bring an additional viewpoint to the play, and often this perspective is broader and more socio-religious than those offered by individual characters; it is also conservative and traditional at times, potentially in an effort to reflect the views of its society rather than the protagonist. The Chorus’s first set of lyrics in Oedipus Rex, for example, express a curiosity about

Apollo’s oracle and describes the ruinous landscape of Thebes. Its second utterance reminds the audience of the newness of Teiresias’s report: “And never until now has any man brought word/Of Laius’s dark death staining Oedipus the King.” The chorus reiterates some of the action, expressing varying degrees of hope and despair with respect to it; one of its members delivers the play’s final lines, much like the Shakespearean epilogue. Sometimes the chorus sings a dirge with one or more characters, as when it suggests to Oedipus not to disbelieve Creon’s protestations of innocence.

Setting

The play’s action occurs outside Oedipus’s palace in Thebes. Thebes had been founded, according to the myth, by Cadmus (a son of Agenor, King of Phoenicia) while searching for his sister Europa, who had been abducted by Zeus in the form of a bull. A direct line of descent can be traced from Cadmus to Oedpius; between them are Polydorus, Labdacus, and, of course, Laius.

Imagery and Foreshadowing

Associated with knowledge and ignorance are the recurring images of darkness and light in the play, and these images work as examples of a kind of foreshadowing for which the play is justly famous. When the play begins, the priest uses this set of contrasts to describe the current condition of Thebes: “And all the house of Kadmos is laid waste/All emptied, and all darkened.” Shortly after this moment, Oedipus promises Creon: “Then once more I must bring what is dark to light,” that is, the murder of Laius will out and Oedipus will be responsible for finding and exposing the culprit(s). Metaphorical and literal uses of darkness and light also provide foreshadowing, since it is Oedipus’s desire to bring the truth to light that leads him to a self-knowledge ruinous and evil enough to cause him to blind himself. After the shepherd reveals his birth he declares, “O Light, may I look on you for the last time!” In saying this he sets up for the audience, who are, presumably, familiar with the legend of Oedipus, his subsequent actions. The second messenger describes his command to himself as he proceeds to perform the gruesome task: “From this hour, go in darkness!” thereby enacting both a literal and metaphorical fall into the dark consequences of his unbearable knowledge. These are but a few examples of how imagery and foreshadowing as techniques can meet, overlap, and mutually inform one another in the play; through subjective interpretation, many more may be found.

Source: http://www.answers.com/topic/oedipus-rex-play-4

Dramatic Structure (Linear/Pyramidal)

1. Exposition
The exposition sets both the tone and theme
For us the ‘theme’ is conflict.
The four types of conflict you may encounter:

Man Vs. Man / External Struggle
Man Vs. Environment / Struggle Against Fate
Man Vs. Society / Moral Struggle
Man Vs. Self / Internal Struggle
2. Rising Action

This is the development of the problem that must be overcome.

3. Inciting Incident

Compounding Conflict / Altercation
Comic Relief / Tension Release
4.  Climax
5. Deus Ex Machina
7. Denouement / Falling Action
Source: http://www.psu.edu/dept/inart10_110/inart10/narr.html
Tragedy

Aristotle’s definition of tragedy: A tragedy is the imitation in dramatic form of an action that is serious and complete, with incidents arousing pity and fear where with it effects a catharsis (emotional outpouring) of such emotions. The language used is pleasurable and throughout appropriate to the situation in which it is used. The chief characters are noble personages (“better than ourselves,” says Aristotle) and the actions they perform are noble actions.
Central features of the Aristotelian archetype:
1. The tragic hero is a character of noble stature and has greatness. If the hero’s fall is to arouse in us the emotions of pity and fear, it must be a fall from a great height.
2. Though the tragic hero is pre-eminently great, he/she is not perfect.Tragic flaw, hubris (excessive pride or passion), and hamartia (some error) lead to the hero’s downfall.
3. The hero’s downfall, therefore, is partially her/his own fault, the result of one’s own free choice, not the result of pure accident or villainy, or some overriding malignant fate.
4. Nevertheless, the hero’s misfortune is not wholly deserved. The punishment exceeds the crime. The hero remains admirable.
5. Yet the tragic fall is not pure loss – though it may result in the hero’s death, before it, there is some increase in awareness, some gain in self-knowledge or, as Aristotle puts it, some “discovery.”
6. Though it arouses solemn emotion – pity and fear, says Aristotle, but compassion and awe might be better terms – tragedy, when well performed, does not leave its audience in a state of depression. It produces a catharsis or an emotional release at the end, one shared as a common experience by the audience.

A pretty cool user-friendly discussion of ‘Oedipus the King’:

http://www.pathguy.com/oedipus.htm

Oedipus Rex: Catharsis

According to Aristotle tragedy should arouse the feeling of pity and terror – pity for the hero’s tragic fate and terror at the sight of the dreadful suffering befalling particularly the hero. By arousing pity and terror, a tragedy aims at the catharsis of these and similar other emotions and cures these feelings which always exist in our hearts. A tragedy, hence, affords emotional relief and the spectators rise at its end with a feeling of pleasure. This, according to Aristotle, is the aesthetic function of tragedy. Through catharsis the emotions are reduced to a healthy and balanced proportion. Besides pity and fear an audience also experiences contempt, hatred, delight, indignation, and admiration. Still, these emotions are less important or less intense. Pity and fear are the dominant emotions and they are intensely produced.

Tragedy, by means of pity, fear and other emotions also provides exercise and nourishment for the emotional side of human nature. It also satisfies our love of beauty and of truth, of truth to life and truth about life. Experience, and more experience, is a natural human craving. Tragedy leads to an enrichment of our experience of human life. It may teach us to live more wisely and widen the boundaries of our experience of life. Tragedy shows the eternal contradiction between human weakness and human courage, human stupidity and human greatness, human frailty and human strength. Tragedy gives us pleasure by exhibiting human endurance and perseverance in the face of calamities and disasters.

Pity and fear are the dominating feelings produced by the play “Oedipus Rex”. Apart from catharsis of these feelings, the play deepens our experience of human life and enhances our understanding of human nature and human psychology. The prologue produces in us pity and fear, pity for the suffering population of Thebes and fear of future misfortunes which might befall the people. The Priest, describing the state of affairs, refers to a tide of death from which there is no escape, death in the fields and pastures, in the wombs of women, death caused by the plague which grips the city. Oedipus gives expression to his feeling of sympathy, telling the Priest that his heart is burdened by the suffering ofall the people. The entry-song of the Chorus following the prologue heightens the feelings of pity and fear. The Chorus says:

“With fear my heart is riven, fear of what shall be told. Fear is upon us.”

Oedipus’ proclamation of his resolve to track down the murderer of Laius brings some relief to us. But the curse, which Oedipus utters upon the unknown criminal and upon those who may be sheltering him, also terrifies us by its fierceness. The scene in which Oedipus clashes with Teiresias contributes to the feelings of pity and terror, the prophecy of Teiresias is frightening because it relates to Oedipus. Teiresias speaks to Oedipus in alarming tones, describing him in a veiled manner as “husband of the woman who bore him, father-killer and father-supplanter” and accusing him openly of being a murderer.

In the scene with Creon, the feeling of terror is much less, arising mainly from Oedipus’ sentence of death against the innocent Creon which is soon withdrawn. The tension reappears with Oedipus’ suspicion on hearing from Jocasta that Laius was killed where three roads met. Oedipus’ account of his arrival at Thebes arouses the feeling of terror by its reference to the prophecy which he received from the oracle, but both terror and pity subside when Jocasta tries to assure Oedipus that prophecies deserve no attention. The song of the Chorus harshly rebuking the proud tyrant revives some of the terror in our minds, but it again subsides at the arrival of the Corinthian after hearing whom Jocasta mocks at the oracles. The drama now continues at a rather low key till first Jocasta and then Oedipus find themselves confronted with the true facts of the situations. With the discovery of true facts, both the feelings of pity and fear reach their climax, with Oedipus lamenting his sinful acts of killing his father and marrying his mother.

But the feelings of pity and fear do not end here. The song of the Chorus immediately following the discovery arouses our deepest sympathy at Oedipus’ sad fate. The Chorus extends the scope of its observations to include all mankind:

“All the generations of mortal man add up to nothing.”

Then comes the messenger from the palace and he gives a terrible account of the manner in which Jocasta hanged herself and Oedipus blinded himself. The messenger concluded his account with the remark that the royal household is today overwhelmed by “calamity, death, ruin, tears and shame”. The conversation of the Chorus with Oedipus who is not blind is also extremely moving. Oedipus speaks of his physical and mental agony and the Chorus tries to console him. Oedipus describes himself as:

“…… shedder of father’s blood, husband of mother, Godless and child of shame, begetter of brother-sons.

The feeling of deep grief by Oedipus is experienced by the audience with an equal intensity. The scene of Oedipus’ meeting with his daughters is also very touching. His daughters, laments Oedipus, will have to wander homeless and husbandless. He appeals to Creon in moving words to look after them.

The feeling of pity and fear has been continuously experienced from the very opening scene of the play. Other feelings aroused in our hearts were irritation with Oedipus at his ill-treatment of Teiresias, anger against Teiresias for his obstinacy and insolence, admiration for Creon for his moderation and loyalty, liking for Jocasta for her devotion to Oedipus, admiration for Oedipus for his relentless pursuits of truth and so on. But the feelings of relief, delight and pleasure have also been aroused in us. These feelings are the result partly of the felicity of the language employed and the music of poetry, but mainly the result of the spectacle of human greatness which we have witnessed side by side with the spectacle of human misery. The sins of Oedipus were committed unknowingly; in fact Oedipus did his utmost to avert the disaster. Oedipus is, therefore, essentially an innocent man, despite his sin of pride and tyranny. Jocasta too is innocent, in spite of her sin of scepticism. There is no villainy to be condemned in the play. The essential goodness of Oedipus, Jocasta and Creon is highly pleasing to us. But even more pleasing though at the same time saddening is the spectacle of human endurance seen in Jocasta and Oedipus inflicting upon themselves a punishment that is awful and terrible. In the closing scene, the blind Oedipus rises truly to heroic heights, displaying an indomitable spirit. Blind and helpless though he now is, and extremely ashamed of his parricide and incestuous experience as he is, he yet shows an invulnerable mind and it is this which has a sustaining, cheering, uplifting and exhilarating effect upon us.

Jocasta’s fate underlines that of Oedipus. So does the great song of the Chorus on the laws which are “enthroned above”. The song and in particular the denunciation of the tyrant are relevant to Oedipus and Jocasta. The song begins with a prayer for purity and reverence, clearly an answer to Oedipus’ and Jocasta’s doubts about the oracles. It ends with an even more emphatic expression of fear of what will happen if the truth of the divine oracles is denied. Between the first and the last stanzas the Chorus describes the man who is born ofhybris, such hybris as is displayed by the King and the Queen. The description follows to a large extent the conventional picture of the tyrant, mentioning his pride, greed and irreverence. Not every feature fits the character of Oedipus, nor should we expect that. The Chorus fears that he who behaves with presumption, pride and self-confidence will turn tyrannical and impious, and they foresee that Zeus, the true King of the world will punish the sins of the mortal King. If he does not do so, all religion will become meaningless, and all will be lost.

Source: http://engliterarium.blogspot.com/2007/12/oedipus-rex-catharsis.html


Oedipus Sources to Assist Understanding: Essay
March 8, 2010, 11:00 am
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Luke Skywalker is Oedipus

The popular Star Wars series contains many
similarities with Sophocles Opedial trilogy or the ancient myth
itself. The central character Luke Skywalker, is compelled by
destiny and a burning inner desire to become a member of the
ancient but dying order of Jedi Knights. In the tradition of
ancient Greek tragedy the conflict Luke is engrossed in is a war
of good vrs evil as he becomes a member of the Rebel forces
battling the powerful and relentless forces of the Empire. To do
so he must journey to a far off mysterious planet to gain the
wisdom of the ancient Yoda (compare to the oracle of Apollo) who
teaches him the secret of the “Force”– a universal energy
something akin perhaps to the stoic notion of the “Logos”. Soon
he finds himself on a mission to save a Princess belonging to the
old, and presumably legitimate, royal family who has fallen
into the hands of the Empire and the notorious Darth Vader. Luke
does rescue the princess and soon falls in love with her only to
find later that he is her brother. Likewise, throughout the
film Darth Vader has a strange preoccupation with the fledgling
knight and seems to have a premonition that he will perhaps be
the one who will precipitate his death (compare with Laius in
Sophocles plays). In a dramatic duel to the death with Darth
Vader Luke later discovers that his arch nemesis is none other
than his father himself. While our modern day Oedipus may be
able to avoid breaking the incestuous taboo Darth Vader does die
in the duel–the riddle of the Sphinx being perhaps none other
than the mystery of his life itself.

Source: http://home.cogeco.ca/~rayser3/starwars.txt

Greek Tragedy:

Tragedy: Tragedy dealt with the big themes of love, loss, pride, the abuse of power and the fraught relationships between men and gods. Typically the main protagonist of a tragedy commits some terrible crime without realizing how foolish and arrogant he has been. Then, as he slowly realizes his error, the world crumbles around him. The three great playwrights of tragedy were Aeschylus, Sophocles, and Euripides.

Aristotle argued that tragedy cleansed the heart through pity and terror, purging us of our petty concerns and worries by making us aware that there can be nobility in suffering. He called this experience ‘catharsis’.

Source: http://www.pbs.org/empires/thegreeks/backgrou…

Notes action and structure: ‘Oedipus the King’:

During the Prologue: this part of the play was normally read by a lone actor. Oedipus calls the citizens of Thebes ‘the children of Cadmus’ because he was the mythical character who founded the city, after slaying a dragon and sowing its teeth to make the first inhabitants. Apollo is invoked because he was the god of healing and a plague has blighted the city. Is Oedipus’ pride evident from the very first lines? Note any references to sight; it is used throughout the play as a metaphor for insight.

Parodos:
At this point the Chorus would usually make their entrance.

First Scene (lines 245 – 526)
This scene is filled with many instances of dramatic irony. For example, when Oedipus condemns the murder which has brought about the plague he is in fact condemning himself (the man who unknowingly killed his own father and took his mother as his wife). Note particularly the character Tiresias who clearly knows more than he’s letting on. Is he trying to protect Oedipus?

First Stasimon (527 – 572) or closing of the scene:
The Chorus seems completely confused – are they following Tiresias or Oedipus?

Second Scene (573 – 953)
Is Creon being admirable here? Why should Oedipus have such a strange reaction to Jocasta’s account of her lost child? What is the significance of her baby’s ankles having been pinned? (Oedipus means ‘swollen ankles’ – a major clue, but why doesn’t he make the connection?).
The reference to the ‘sacred dance’ (line 895) refers to the god Bacchus (aka Dionysus), god of wine, changing seasons and frenzy.

Third Scene (998 – 1214)
Consider Jocasta’s ongoing aspersion of oracles in the light of what is about to happen. At what point does she begin to suspect the truth? Why does Oedipus remain ignorant? Note the way the Chorus takes Oedipus’ hope and runs with it, imagining him to be the foundling son of a god.

Fourth Scene (1215 – 1310)
Aristotle believed Oedipus Rex to be the finest of all tragedies because the protagonist’s recognition of the truth coincides with the reversal of his fortunes. Where exactly does this occur?

Fourth Stasimon (1311 – 1350)
Oedipus has become the paradigm of misfortune.

Fifth Scene (1351 – 1432)
What was Oedipus trying to do when he found his mother/wife dead? Is blinding an appropriate (self) punishment?

Sixth Scene and Exodus (1499 – end)
Does anything surprise you about the way Oedipus views disaster in this scene? Is Creon fair to Oedipus? Why do Oedipus’ daughter remain so special to him? What effect does blindness have open Oedipus’ wisdom?

Themes:

The theme of fate is central to this play (and indeed, all Greek drama). What were the social attitudes that identify the ancient Greeks? What are the Greek concerned about in this play? How did they feel about prophesy, priests, the gods, and fate? How did pride (hubris) and arrogance affect Oedipus’ fate? What in his personality brought about his fate when others tried to turn him away from it?

Source: http://www.pbs.org/empires/thegreeks/educatio…

Lecture Transcript on ‘Oedipus the King’

http://records.viu.ca/~johnstoi/introser/oedipus.htm

Oedipus the King game

http://www.users.globalnet.co.uk/~loxias/oedipus/oedipusindex.htm

Oedipus the King, 1984. Directed by Don Taylor



Essay Writing
March 7, 2010, 11:56 am
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The focus for the next few weeks will be on essay-writing.

Here is your first essay question and some notes:

“The conflict central to ‘Oedipus the King’ is not that between Oedipus and his world, but between Oedipus and himself.”

Argue to what extent you agree with the above statement. In your response you must refer to the ways in which Sophocles uses the language and structure of his chosen form to represent his ideas.

Length: 800-1000 words.

Don’t forget to use the STEW paragraph formula. I’ve attached the essay-writing booklet. However, you are now in senior school and this means you should feel confident to experiment with paragraph structure to fit your ideas. The ingredients remain the same. Nominalisation is a must. Remember that evaluation and analysis of ideas and techniques is essential for all quality English essays.

Please add your questions etc below as these will help other students – both at Davo and Lisarow.

Ms Hewes

how to write an english essay_booklet



Lisarow & Davo Hook-up

Hi everyone,

Mr Martin and myself are planning a second Video Conference between our two classes. The date as it stands at the moment is next Friday, 12th March.

At Davo we’ve been looking at our prescribed text (Oedipus the King, by Sophocles) and considering what the text has to say about conflict. The play is quite complex and has required some serious research and discussion about Ancient Greece and the values the Greeks championed back in the day.

The creative tasks have been completed by students and they’re now eagerly (cough) awaiting my feedback. Let’s hope it gets to them before the HSC does, lol.

So … what will be the focus of our next chat?

I am excited about the notion of context and how exploring a different world/context in creative writing can really challenge the writer and thus broaden the ideas being presented.

Or maybe you’d like to chat re: assessment tasks?

Please post your ideas below!

Ms Hewes 🙂